Lots of wonderful imagery, Boris! Great start!
The link above to the story world does not function though. Having something for the reader, maybe visual, to understand the world and character they are coming in to read about would be very helpful! Otherwise all this:
"Anarand’aris, Year 4.310 in the Age of Last Hope 7th of Yumtal in the Windy Season
D’al Vorat, County of Amalay, Realm of Kiriador"
and a 1st p pov character that jumps right into a dream sequence can feel very confusing and disorienting. The reader doesn't know who is this person saying "I" or what planet/environment to get their bearings before being swept into any alternate kinda-trippy reality!