Hi Susea,
I love the premise of your story, and I’m certain readers will appreciate it too!
Now, one note. On page 3 of your introduction, you mentioned: “PSITTA holds her index finger up and has a lightbulb moment.” Do you mean PSITTA’s wing points like an index finger? I ask because of the age group you’re targeting. Not sure if a bird with an index finger would land well here.
I wish I could give you more in-depth feedback, but since I’m not used to writing graphic novels, I found it a bit hard to visualize. Nevertheless, your characters seem pretty engaging, and I felt the sense of humor throughout the pages. I can’t wait to see where this will take you.