Hello Susea, I love the graphic. I am used to regular picture books and not graphic novel formats. I found it hard to follow or picture what would actually be on the page for a reader. Are some of the things posted here illustration notations? I'd love to read the actual words without other notations to get a feel for what the reader would be 'reading'. Maybe just the words and a short illustration note in brackets? Great topic. I think children will love learning about Dodos and also raising concerns about other animals we have lost or are in the process of losing. As I said, if you could post the actual words that will be on the page to be read, I could give you a better impression of how it works.