The writing style is engaging, with clear POV characters and palpable tension during the initial character interactions. The use of italics when sharing inner thoughts is probably unnecessary, and it creates distance in the narrative voice. Prologues are disfavored lately, so you might consider whether to restyle the prologue as chapter one or start your novel at a different point that better frames your protagonist's desires and pressure points. The content of your prologue could be introduced later in the story if it's not the best way to hook your reader into your protagonist's main conflict.